a poem to share

amom2_2006July 27, 2006

the other night i wrote this poem for my matt... i miss him so much and would like to share this with all of you...

My heart is breaking

I can not speak

the words are foreign

the language weak

what do you do when death appears

how do you cope in the coming years

you slowly breath

first in, then out

you look beyond to calm your doubt

it can not be comprehended here

and so you cry the unending tear

my life is changed forever now

the ties that bind are broke somehow

you can not fix this broken tie

instead you only cry and cry

you cry within to mask the pain

you cry within but its in vain

your cries can not be heard out here

your cries are the cries of the unending tear

please keep me in your prayers....

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It's a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.

    Bookmark   July 27, 2006 at 11:32AM
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Lovely poem, expressing your pain so well. Sorry about your loss.

    Bookmark   July 27, 2006 at 4:33PM
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What a beautiful poem to express your profound sadness. I do know the pain, also. If it's okay with you, I'd may share this poem with our local Compassionate Friends chapter. I will put it in our newsletter if it's okay with you. Please let me know. I would like to give credit where credit is due, so if you would like for me to give your name, please email me and give it to me. By the way, my husband's and my email addresses on the website are not being used anymore. Use the email address on this site to email us.

Here is a link that might be useful: Christin Cosby Memorial Web Site

    Bookmark   July 27, 2006 at 9:23PM
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That is a beautiful poem, I hope this will give you comfort, I haven't written anything as yet, I will soon I hope.
I did write some poems for my son who passed away 20 years ago at the age of 10 months, and I had a poem published at the compassionate friends here in Australia.

    Bookmark   July 28, 2006 at 12:52AM
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Beautiful poem - wonderfully said. I wish for your comfort and peace in the coming days and weeks. I am sorry for your loss.

    Bookmark   July 29, 2006 at 12:34AM
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Thank You for sharing I just lost my hubby after 30 wonderful years how do we go on?

    Bookmark   July 31, 2006 at 12:03AM
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I lost my hubby after 50 wonderful years..but it is so difficult to go on..we were going to be together forever..it what he told me..but God had other plans..I don't want to wake up another day. I pray for everone that has lost a loved one..I'm so sorry.

    Bookmark   August 7, 2006 at 7:03PM
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